Prinz Eugin - Azur Lane New Year's Festival

First of all, WOW! This is by far one of your best works! The attention to detail is amazing! I showed Hannah this and she thought it was amazing too! We both are always love seeing your work that you make and I always leave it up for Hannah to see too, and she does the same for me haha

So I usually give a segment on what is great about the piece and what needs improvement when I do these critique thingies lol So since you requested it here we go! Serious time haha

First, my personal favorite thing about her is her belt. I love the detail in it. The design is very reminiscent of the traditional kimono. The colors you picked out are also well done. They all go together and nothing seems out of place because of the color. The anatomy is also well done. No awkward body parts are present or out of proportion which speaks greatly on your skill as an artist <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Another thing about anatomy is the way you drew her chest. A lot of anime artist draw big breasts more rounded instead of flatter and more slope. You have done that perfectly and it gives the drawing a sense of realism. Once again, speaking to your skill as an anime artist. I would definitely love to watch an Anime or Henti with her in it! haha And lastly, the two hardest things to draw, the hair and hands, are done flawlessly. You are way beyond my, and most other artists I see on here's skill level. And that is not craping on their skill, you just rocked it!

So now some things that I noticed should be fixed or improved. On her right breast there is a sharp angle that looks weird. I get that the beads are holding it up but that part that juts out makes the perspective of where here outfit is relative to that part confusing.

Two other things that seem out of place or strange is the gray lines and her chopsticks. What are the gray lines? A lens flair? A really close object? Im guessing something hanging from a tree? But because the tree is only second to the mysterious gray blurs it becomes its own emphasis. Im sure they have a purpose but the gray parts should be removed. The tree can stay.

Her chopsticks should extend past the object she is holding. She seems like she is holding it by the VERY end which looks like it will fall at any moment, but yet the object she is eating looks soft and would not allow her to get enough grip to hold it at the tips as she would cut in half and drop it. And also, what is she eating any way?

End serious time! haha Obviously the negatives are SUPER minor compared to the amazing positives. This was awesome man. You really are super talented and I know you will keep coming out with amazing stuff as always!

Much love,
Brad